This is an old one....like 6 years old, but i just unpacked a box with my first black book and i found come ancient writings...so i'll post them here bit by bit...thoughts would be good...my style should in theory be more evovled now....

i like this poem. it's so realistic. did this happen to you? nice one. =)

I seriously think I have read this before... maybe I have, just haven't commented on it yet.
From the poems of yours I've read so far, this is by far my favourite one of yours. Your first stanza was the best, it gave a great introduction to it.
... I have no helpful critizism. But thankyou stacks for your comment on my poem- made me smile. :-)

awesome poem