this was a really good poem, i liked each of the bar's and they had really good stanza's. It was a really nice and it was a good poem about another bad subject.

Perhaps with a close friend your poems will become more uplifting, a lot of people on here seem to leave suicide notes on here, i am glad to see that you are not one of them.

oh, p.s. Five/Five

awsome job, u two are so cute;)

wow i really wish i had those kind of words to stick on paper i buld up the feelings but yet cant explain them your really good at writting stick with it