OMG I LOVE IT!!!! U R SUCH AN AWSOME WRITER!!! N I CAN COMPLETELY RELATE TO THAT!!! I LOVE U SWEETIE! UR THE GREATEST! DONT EVER STOP WRITING BC THE WORLD NEEDS UR BEAUTIFUL POEMS SO MUCH! MWAHSSSSSSS
LIA JNELL

Hey, this is really good...it flowz really smooth...great job hun!! i can relate to ur poem...keep on writing and take care!!
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

Wow... no one has commented in the way you do to my poems... I'm touched.. and I understand you. thank you for the encouragement..;)

CyN

omg this rocks!! so sad it gave me shivers but at the same time really excellent!

I know that I’m not broken.
Just ached and feeling torn.
All these things are overwhelming.
What could be the reason I was born?

i loved that paragraph!!! lol
>>5/5<<
bec xXx