Amazing, absolutely amazing. can completely understand and completely relate....i read it several times over i liked it so much keep up the good work!!

Kalika

I know and understand what you're trying to say in this poem, but I think you should try and revise it a little bit. Some of the lines are alot long that the others which makes the flow quite unsettled.
It's nothing major, but I think it could do with some slight tweaks.
It's a really emotional poem, to which I'm sure alot can relate, but I think you could get alot more recognition for it if you took the time to read it over and change a few things.
Take care of yourself,
All my love,
Laura.

wow, this poem is amazing. 5/5 for sure. I can relate to it so much its scary, this is a excelent poem . you have got alot of talent. your added to my favorites forsure.

Paula <3 --- Keep on writing

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