by ChildofGod87 Jan 24, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Pain can cause alot of things |
by Bizarre
this is one of my favorite one of yours. great job. keep it up. |
by Dark Savior
good poem, the beats were close enough, most were only three off which is what i would like to see in a poem. I think your a talened young woman and should continue to write. |
by EpithetPoet
really enjoyed. nice wording and everything. keep it up! |
by Marta
hehe very inspirational peom. it's good you are trying to send some comfort through your poems. i really liked it! keep it up x x x x |
by Rachele
awwwww thats a cute poem <5> keep it up thanx so much for the comments :) |