Something different, but creative. With alot of meaning. Well done yeah!

;;^^Kalah

Very Excellent poem i just hope nobody has to acually go through that you abc song is also very good.
-TrueAngel

ahh very creative, i am a bit jealous. i can juss imagine a lil kid singing their Abcs after hearing mom and dad fighting...!! wow, awesome work...5 even tho i am jealous, i give u what u deserve hehe lol!! GREAT!
God Bless
Love Heather

I also read both parts and it is differant but good i give you a 5 on both