naw i thought it was pretty good. that's how i feel sometimes, my mom and i dont have that good of a relationship with each other either.... good poem mate. lots of love
-A

oh and for the title maybe 'silent voices'?

Amazing work hun...I loved it...so sad, I'm sorry I can't help you :( I love you...I do...please don't leave me...I need you..I do, Nick, I do...You're so amazing...<33 xxxx Great write...for a title suggestion , I think maybe 'His Last Night'...but I unno, yours is good...I love you <33 please be okay...You mean to much to me for me to lose you... xxxxx please take care sweetie, you're in my thoughts and heart xxxxx <33

-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCarePleasexx

i love this poem!!!

This is my new favorite poem. Its awesome. Keep writing cuz I love it. Check out mine if u want

Babe...Please hun, please hold tight for me....Please babe...I need you....please hunny. I really do!! Please, do this for me...please stay
Love you
Sammy

My heart breaks for you. I wish I could take your pain away, but I can't...Just please don't do this to yourself. No matter how hard it gets, someone DOES care. I care. We care. Not only would we lose a great poem, we would also lose a great person - someone who truly has a heart of gold. You do not deserve to feel this pain...Great poem anyway, it's really deep.

Its not "crap"
Its actually pretty good.

amazing poem. it really speaks to me. please don't go.. we all need you here. please, take care. keep up the writing..you are an amazing person and no one wants to lose you. love u nick.

xx sarah xx

ur poem is pretty good....i loike it...keep it up...lol
Take care

Luv,
Noziyna

Hey, this was really good!! the title suitz it amazingly well!! this poem isnt crap! itz awesome!! keep on writing and take care...
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

Hey baby, I know this isn't a new poem. But I wanted to just drop by and say hi to you. let you know how much I love you!! Which is a LOT!! I love you more than anything!! I found out that progress reports come out on the 18th, so it might be thta long b4 i'm ungrounded, i hope not though!!
Love you
Sammy

P.S. Will you please make sure Sarah is alright for me, give her my love and tell her to hold on tight for me!!

Same goes to you!! Hold on tight!!

LOL! you call that crap, you can't be serious. I liked it, you want crap, go and read the shit i write.

hope ya having a great day and if not i wish you were

-ZaMMI D-

There is no way you can call this poem crap. It's the best poem I have read in a long time. There are so many god stanzas in there it's unbelievable.
And I know I don't know you, but I do know just from reading these comments that there are a lot of people that care about you.. I know this stuff is hard to get through, believe me. But you have to realize it's the people that love you that get you through each day...
Great job hun! :)
Love,
Tiff

quit saying ur stuff is crap they r really good