I wish that there was some way I could change the world.... this was so true, yet so terrible.... this was an amazing poem...i feel for your friend...if you ever need to talk you can email me @ unusedtarget2@yahoo.com
Janie

Woah... very well done, a great perspective... it's so sad the way this world works in ways like these...

on a happier note, very well written -5-

xx, PorteR

this is a very sad poem. and it is very sad about your friend. it must be horrible, i hope that one day she will gain the understanding that people love her for who she is, and she should love herself for that too, not by being a slave to the media or society. i really hope she gets better, and starts to be comfortable undernieth her own skin and not an image in a magazine. send my love in thought. and if it gets really bad, i dunno if she is seeking help, but she really should, or even you could to get some advise.
good luck.
great poem, and very well written,
polly

Thank you guys SO much for the comments, I don't knw what I would do without them! ^_^

It was good but to me it seemed like there was something missing! although very good! good job!

wow, i know how you feel, i have helped a friend overcome this and anorexia...just be there for your friend, listen, and guide her along the way...if things get out of hand, you may need to tell someone to increase her chances at living...God Bless
Love Heather M Craig