by FireCracker Jan 25, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
A lay awake in bed |
by Eibutsina
Oh sweet hun! This is another great piece you can add to your already long list - such an essence of saddness to it too - a great write regardless keep it up hun and stay smiling! |
by Chelsey
Hey Maybeth! This poem was very sweet!! I loved every line and again you wrote another beautiful masterpiece to add to your collection!!! I loved it! Keep it up! |
by Mustardhart
This is a beautiful Poem. Wonderful!! Way to go baby!! Take 5**** once more |
by Dark Savior
good poem maybeth. i liked it, just sorta lacked structure at the time. i liked it all in all. i thought it was a good read with a good message. |
im cryin j/k keep writin 5/5 |