Great job! i loved it! keep up the good work, and i hope you feel better :o)

Check out my poems & comment if your interested! it means alot! thanks!

..xO Jessie

im cryin j/k keep writin 5/5

good poem maybeth. i liked it, just sorta lacked structure at the time. i liked it all in all. i thought it was a good read with a good message.

the old saying/philosophy quote.

"If a man's good for nothing else, he can at least teach philosophy." - William James.

This is a beautiful Poem. Wonderful!! Way to go baby!! Take 5**** once more

Hey Maybeth! This poem was very sweet!! I loved every line and again you wrote another beautiful masterpiece to add to your collection!!! I loved it! Keep it up!
~Chelsey~

Oh sweet hun! This is another great piece you can add to your already long list - such an essence of saddness to it too - a great write regardless keep it up hun and stay smiling!