Screen written apology

by Austin   Jan 25, 2005


His tears fill the room
Those around could hear his sobs
Sobs of a man in grief
Upset over the loss of his love
Nothing quite mattered anymore
All was lost
He was crush and his strength had faded away
All hope was gone on that day
His mind was lost
And he could only say
I gotta have one more try
She wouldn't hear him out though
She had moved on
His tears meant nothing
Like salt on open wounds
Her words cut like daggers
SO he wrote her a letter
telling her how he felt
How the words I love you use to make him elated
Now they've made him insane
Over and over they played in his head
But it seemed to easy
For her that is
He gave her all he had
But it was nothing more than a
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  • 19 years ago

    by Ş∂ņďħy∂

    I like the way you put words together. It was evident in both of your poems. Thou, this was a common theme; i didn't get bored because of your style of writing. Do try writing something’s other than the common subjects. You are great at words and that is a sharp weapon when it comes to poetry. IF the weapon is in the proper hands than amazing things can be done. So use your weapon properly! Be more imaginative, add more smiles, and put your poems in some format… I would have not suggested this to anybody. I felt you are capable of it.

  • 19 years ago

    by *Sherrie*

    im sencing youve been hurt before..i can sence the pain in your words...if you havent then your a even better writer then i thought..~sherrie~

  • 19 years ago

    by browneyes

    I like rhyming poems. But I prefer this type of poem much more. This poem really got to me. It expressed an emotion all of us have expierenced at some time. I can relate to this poem so well. Very nice structure.

    -BJ

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