I like rhyming poems. But I prefer this type of poem much more. This poem really got to me. It expressed an emotion all of us have expierenced at some time. I can relate to this poem so well. Very nice structure.

-BJ

im sencing youve been hurt before..i can sence the pain in your words...if you havent then your a even better writer then i thought..~sherrie~

I like the way you put words together. It was evident in both of your poems. Thou, this was a common theme; i didn't get bored because of your style of writing. Do try writing something’s other than the common subjects. You are great at words and that is a sharp weapon when it comes to poetry. IF the weapon is in the proper hands than amazing things can be done. So use your weapon properly! Be more imaginative, add more smiles, and put your poems in some format… I would have not suggested this to anybody. I felt you are capable of it.