by xeag Jan 25, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Drip, Drip, Drip, the crimson starts flowing like the rain of a cloudy day |
by ?
*flowed, lol what the hell am I thinking!? |
by ?
Good poem, I kinda like scary poems, so I liked yours alot, it had a good rhythm and followed well xxx |
by *Sherrie*
this is a great poem...keep up the great work hun...~hun~ |
by happy days
i really hope this isnt true or never will be true but it is an awesome poem |
by Leah20
This was good, yet very frightening, I hope that you would never do anything like this. Capitilize the I's because it detracts from teh poem when you don't. The poem was well written, however the message was quite scary. |