Crimson Thoughts

by xeag   Jan 25, 2005


Drip, Drip, Drip, the crimson starts flowing like the rain of a cloudy day

Why did i do it i didn't\'want it to end this way.

So many years I lived with these thoughts in my mind.

Soon I will leave all this sorrow behind

My body feels tired, shallow and numb now I just wait for my freedom to come.

My carpet is stained with pain from the past I never wanted this feeling to last.

So I choose a way out I choose to break free I decided to leave and to take her with me.

I hated to hurt her but I knew that I must she trampled my heart and she broke all my trust.

It was one o\' clock when her doorbell did ring I aimed at her forehead and I just did my thing.

I pulled the trigger once, twice, three times shes dead I made sure every bullet went straight through her head.

She hurt me so bad now the favor\'s returned I lit up her body and I watched the b**** burn.

I ran straight home realizing what was done my body too cowardly to be freed by a gun.

My blade it will help me as its always done before i opened my wrists and cut a bit more, more and more till my soul had been freed the crimson Has ended I finished the deed.

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  • 19 years ago

    by ?

    *flowed, lol what the hell am I thinking!?

  • 19 years ago

    by ?

    Good poem, I kinda like scary poems, so I liked yours alot, it had a good rhythm and followed well xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by *Sherrie*

    this is a great poem...keep up the great work hun...~hun~

  • 19 years ago

    by happy days

    i really hope this isnt true or never will be true but it is an awesome poem

  • 19 years ago

    by Leah20

    This was good, yet very frightening, I hope that you would never do anything like this. Capitilize the I's because it detracts from teh poem when you don't. The poem was well written, however the message was quite scary.