Inauguration

Im afriad to say this is way over my head, it was brought to my attention by dwelt, who recomended it to me in a contest, but i feel it is too high above my standards that to judge it would be unfair to you as their are many things about this poem that i am simply too young and unknowledgeable to either understand or appreciate.

from reading this poem (and a few others of yours) i can however appreciate that you are a very talented poet and one that should not confine yourself to the limited capacity of this website and the people who cannot/do not appreciate your writing. get out there and show your talent to the world!!

-biscuit-

....yup.....

Sound bites of "freedom"
And "Let them eat cake."

PRICELESS!!! I loved this poem. It is so very true. You couldn't have expressed it better! Excellent.

Very beautifully written, yet very sad, pointing out the faults of our humanity.
I love your style; it had immense flow, yet was so differently written. Brackets and disjointed sentances, they added a superb feel to the poem.
Well done! Brilliantly written!

not bad