Comments : Of The Apple

  • 19 years ago

    by Elizabeth Ann

    Herodotus would be proud *smiles*.

    I believe you to belong among the Greeks Miles ;)

    I lovely tell of light and dark, and all the other synonimous paradigms.

  • 19 years ago

    by pinkalias

    Brilliant!
    How do you do it? you take these concepts and values and write your heart out onto them which produces these exotic format of words transformed to beautiful symbols and meaning.
    i really admire this, your comparisons were exotic and powerful. i love that you expressed your views over the concepts while adding thorough and detailed poetic structure.
    i especially admire the lines,

    "How can one deny the
    Magic terror sublime beauty
    Adrenaline passion of
    Life, hate, strife, death,
    Sex, love, sorrow, remorse,
    Fear, faith, courage, hope,
    Despair and glory,
    Isolation, anonymity,
    Innocence, damnation,
    Seduction, repulsion,
    Physical ecstasy,
    Spiritual rapture?"

    Absolutly lovely. Excellent job

  • 19 years ago

    by FTS Miles

    Thank you both! Exceptional praise, miladies... and you've made me blush.