Angel of Mine

by No Motiv?   Jan 25, 2005


Look at yourself-
Where is your pride?
You show no strength-
You cower and hide!

The sins you have commited
The God you have displeased
The children you have killed
And the hearts you have diseased

My dreams were of value
Before you came through
I hate your god damn wings
And your stupid halo, too

Angel of mine,
You are more worthless than prayer
The times that I needed you,
You were never there!

Within the "heart of hearts",
Beneath the devil that dwells,
In your cold, bitter heart-
Evil prevails

You have proven my belief-
God is nothing but a lie
Mother you taught me nothing;
Jesus is just an excuse to deny.

"Angel of Hell"
That is the title you earn...
Within the great depths of fire
In Hell you shall burn

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  • 19 years ago

    by julie

    that was amazing! It was so good, the ryhming was perfect, and the topic great. well done, dark it was indeed :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Unrequited

    you're right! our poems are very similar! i'm sorry you feel that way, tho. i've always felt that God was there for me, and i hope you feel that way as well. I hope you continue to read my poems. take care!
    Tom

  • 19 years ago

    by Amilo

    I thought it was quite lovely.. a once ethereal image of an angel - marvelously stained with hate in this poem. Well done...

  • 19 years ago

    by Paula

    Wow! this poem is really deep, really well expressed. Excellent rhyming. Keep up the good work. 5/5 . Your getting added to my favorites.
    Paula <3

  • 19 years ago

    by Cynthia

    Although I might not agree with this poem, it was well written. *thumbs up*

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