With you only...

by anagha   Jan 25, 2005


It's like dancing without a partner,
each day keeps getting harder.
The vacuum of lonliness surrounds me,
the pull of it does not let me be me!!

By its force i keep falling
down below is anyone waiting?
being swept off my feet is what others may need,
but being held in your arms is my greed!!

just turn around and take a look
my life is like a closed book
open it up and set me free
only with you now i want to be

10/1/2005 12.30pm

i know its kinda lame.. my frnd suggested better words but i want it to be how i wrote it..
pls comment

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  • 19 years ago

    by Saravana Kumar S

    it's good that you never choose to change the poem...b'coz i liked the way it was written...true feelings are what makes a poem beautiful...keep writing...take care...FIVE>>>