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Very sad i hope the best for your mother 5/5

Lovely, your thoroughed detail adds beauty while the anticipation to hear the mother utter words to acknowledge awareness of existance and comfort creates a more in depth emotional connection to the piece. I really admired the first lines,
"She gripped the lace fingers,
interlocking with her own.
Reaching out her other, she stroked
the back of her mothers, brittle hand."
They intercept symbols of the mother's love with the fragileness of her frail body.
Greatest wishes the operation was successful. Lovely job

good discriptive writing, i like the style, it is not my own, but i wish i could brach out and do something like this, very nice, you write what you see through wrods, nice job with this
*doll parts*

SIlver wow I am in awe I connected with this poem because I have down all that it said because I lsot my mother when I was nine so It was very meaningfull and i wish only the ending was the same Great job though amazing work of emotion as far as your mother best of wishes and great health I pray upon her and you

I liked the emotion that you conveyed in this poem, poetry doesn't have to rhyme to be good, and this poem proved that fact.