Well done, KT, i really like this one, awesome job... repetition used nicely and i like the main metaphor...

good jo -5-

xx, PorteR

i love the way you wrote this...this poem memorzied me i love it.....~sherrie~

Very good job! This is one of my favorites of yours.

Prisoner of pain
Isolated, insane
You aren't my friend
Because in the end
What's left to gain, when you're a
Prisoner of pain…
this was my favorite part! this was really good!

sorry could you check any of mine out...ecspecially the one i have featured! thanks!
<3randy!

jeez you are a good writer!! dam i wish i could write like you! my work is soo dull!!! ugh if ya got time plz check out my stuff and tell me what cha think!! awesome job!!

keep rockin!!

Emmerz

i really like ur poem. it's awesome and thanks for ur comment it means a lot to me...take care
Luv,
Noziyna
(Once again, GREAT Poem!!!)

very creative i loved it!!!!!!!! so full of pain and feeling beautiful job!
>>5/5<<
bec xXx