When She's Down

by Bill   Jan 25, 2005


There is terrible sadness all around
when the girl I love is feeling down
She tries to hide it with a fake smile
but I am on to her all of the while
I've asked her to tell me what troubles her
then she says "It's a long story"
I've got the time! I'm just sitting here......it's boring
I want to help you, if you'll let me
Tell me about it, is it about he or she?
Open up to me, I'll never hurt you
You can tell me, I'll always be true
I know we aren't going out
but i want to know you, and what you're about
I know you'll do what you think is true
I just don't know how to say that I love you...

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  • 19 years ago

    by Tammy

    Another very good poem!! I really liked it.