by happy days Jan 25, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
My smile hides the truth |
wow, that was good, i really liked it, even tho some of it didn't rhyme it still had a poetic rythum i liked it, good job (thanx for commenting on mine) |
by Andrea
if only people really did listen to the people crying out silently in pain. excellent poem! |
by Tiffaney
WOW Good job i can realate a lot to it and i understand what your going through. If you ever need to talk to you can talk to me. You should have a look at some of my poems sometime there not the best but i try. |
by Tiffaney
WOW Good job i can realate a lot to it and i understand what your going through. If you ever need to talk to you can talk to me. You should have a look at some of my poems sometime there not the best but i try. |