WOW Good job i can realate a lot to it and i understand what your going through. If you ever need to talk to you can talk to me. You should have a look at some of my poems sometime there not the best but i try.

WOW Good job i can realate a lot to it and i understand what your going through. If you ever need to talk to you can talk to me. You should have a look at some of my poems sometime there not the best but i try.

if only people really did listen to the people crying out silently in pain. excellent poem!

wow, that was good, i really liked it, even tho some of it didn't rhyme it still had a poetic rythum i liked it, good job (thanx for commenting on mine)