powerful poem, beautifully written, i loved it.
take care
Scooby

First off Scarlette, you're good, i mean really talented. The descriptions were perfect and delicate. Your choice of comparisons really gave a sense of tranquility and hope. Also stating the obvious that some people find hard to grasp. Everybody is human, we're all alike. Thanks for sharing a piece of your soul.

thats really cool...i like that!

Very nice job, very original. I liked the way that you portrayed humans because it is so true that we are hindering on evilness and godliness. Keep it up!