Thanks, I wrote it in like 10 minutes, so I think I do need to work on the flow. :)

:o omg!! so well written, and leaves such a meaningful lesson! wonderful!

thats reeeally good! i liked it!

yeah...makes you think...grr...i talk to so many people....now i am feelin a bit scared :( great poem!! God Bless
Love Heather

Wow nice one! I love it! Great rhymin 2! 5/5 ! Keep it up! Arrivederci!

Very nice poem..It's written very well.I was a little choppy but it was pretty good.Keep up the good work. 5/5

-Russell-