dang!!! girl, so sorry about your
boy friend. your poem really
expresses how much you’re hurting.
I know your doing time too, hang
In there. Excellent write 5/5

Wow!!! Really good. Keep writing.. But I'm sorry about your boyfriend.

I like the fast pace of writing and the emotion by this peom great job

Gurl i know wot itz like i went 2 c my man last week 4 da 1st time n i cry coz i wana bring him home wit me good 1 doll

Hey ur poem is really nice. i know how it feels my man is in jail to.