One last breath

by Ksusha   Jan 25, 2005


She wrote her
last goodbyes
Sealing them
with tears in her eyes

She lifted her
pretty toy
Knowing the end is near
she smiles with joy

Haunted by voices
in her head
She is fading
accepting things they always said

With one last tear
she shreds through the pain
Losing the light
feeling everything drain

She lays on the floor
accepting her death
Letting everything go
with one last breath

---please rate and comment---

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 18 years ago

    by Mommy And Me

    Wow this is deep. and full of thought. almost brough a tear to my eye.. which is very hard to do. gret work

  • 19 years ago

    by Rusted x Heart

    I really like the flow of this one. And i love the way you depicted the entire scene without vivid gruesome physical imagery as most people tend to do writing poems of this nature, very well put!

  • 19 years ago

    by JL

    amazin poem!! 5/5 thnx 4 ur comment

  • 19 years ago

    by Ashley

    your poems are awesome!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    I likes it a lot!

Read All Comments (8)

More Poems By Ksusha