Hey, this is amazing!! it runz smoothly..great job...u may be a beginner but u certainly are awesome!! keep it up and take care...
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

really good. nice word choice.

that is realy good it has such a smooth flow

I likes it a lot!

your poems are awesome!!!

amazin poem!! 5/5 thnx 4 ur comment

I really like the flow of this one. And i love the way you depicted the entire scene without vivid gruesome physical imagery as most people tend to do writing poems of this nature, very well put!

Wow this is deep. and full of thought. almost brough a tear to my eye.. which is very hard to do. gret work