woah! exellent job!!!!!!! great poem. like 'missy' i can very much relate to your poem. i love the way you related the image ofthe entanglement of your hair when drowning, what a great yet scary image. that is one of the most promonent sort of image that comes to mind while in water/'drowning'. as in one of my own poems, 'im packing for heaven i guess' as i was describing the image of drowning in a bath of tears i also used a vision i saw from through my hair. GREAT MINDS THINK ALIKE! hehe. thanks for the comments! they are always appreciated, and improvements put in place. thanks.
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That was really good! Good Job!

That was a great poem, I liked the last verse especially, thanx for the comment xxx

The whole poem was wonderful but unlike everyone else instead of loving the end line solely i focused on the 2 stanzas in the center, i thought that was so creative and wonderfully written! great work *5
Love Heather M Craig