Comments : My dark thoughts

  • 19 years ago

    by Kalika

    wonderful poem......parents are so naiive.....and you captured that so wonderfully.....

    Kalika

  • 19 years ago

    by She Is Now Gone Away

    Hey good writing, I aint as good as you in fact I aint good at all but I still write but you write really well and my mom she commented to you, your poem made her cry so quote back if you want.

  • 19 years ago

    by Stephanie

    great poem! i totally know exactly what u r talking about!