It was like you picked an incident from my own past. Its a good poem. I could realte to it. Great work!

Thanks for the comment. I have no problem if use that poem. And Happy anniversary.

I have a Sizzling poem for Anniversary. Its called "happy Anniversary". But, It may not be the perfect fit.

alright thanks...i will read more of your poems!

Sounds like these words could be good lyrics for a song...
over all, a good poem, though you could've shortened some lines down... just my humble opinion :-) keep writing