by Ş∂ņÄħy∂ Jan 26, 2005
category :
Life, society /
other
My mom is happy as I talk to her everyday |
I loved this poem for I definatly agree with you, the internet has a way of making us reclusive and callus to what should be important things in our lives, it has a way of shutting us down and turning our lives upside down when used incorrectly. I liked how you chose to voice that side of things. nice work. |
by Andrea
excellent satire!! i havent read one in a while and this is really good. i like the structure. great work! |
by Dorotea©
heyy...! i thought it was very creative and i like the idea alot! yeah i wouldnt survive without my computer! |
by nandini
hey trincy i do agree with u....the fun that actually meeting ur relatives, friends, etc personally; gives us cannot be matched with this so called cyber fun.... still loved the way u mentioned this fact thru this poem..keep writing!!! |
even though technology gets us closer,the happiness we get when we are together is entirely different...i guess you have made an excellent point here...take care and keep smiling..FIVE>>> |