What You're Doing*

by NoPatience   Jan 26, 2005


What is it
that makes you say
the awful things
you said today?

could it be me?
but what did i do?
I'm your girlfriend
but that means nothing to you

What is it
that I can say
to make us better
just like the old days?

how do I tell you
that you're making a mistake
and that this is the final
smile I will fake

What is it
that I've done thats so wrong
to make you blind to see
that I've been hurting for too long

please try to understand
that I'm waiting for you to see
that what you're doing
is hurting me

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  • 19 years ago

    by NoPatience

    it means that im finished faking smiles and that hes making a big mistake. pretty simple. but thanks for the comment and appreciate your honesty.

  • 19 years ago

    by Leah20

    Nice job, a few parts seemed forced, for some reason this doesnt seem to flow to me
    how do I tell you
    that you're making a mistake
    and that this is the final
    smile I will fake

    Overall not bad.

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