Last I love you

Sad but well written. You really did a great job there. Great work!!! =) Could you check my new poem titled My Story thanks!!!! 5/5

well I could be like the others and tell you it was sublime or just give you a good pat on your back and say good job. To tell you the truth I would be a liar if I did the above. At least to me I think you need more substance more thought in the message you want to convey. Ok so my words are not popular but if you want my opinion let me read something that has heart I mean true heart. Fluff anyone can jot down Passion and heart thats where the work begins oh well keep it up you got a ways to go. Please if you wish read any of mine I am sure you would see the difference. Not saying your bad please don't take it that way just give me something to ponder over make me think then you can truely call yourself a poet. Robert

again, great poem...I think I will just add you to my favorites....Looking forward to new work, keep it up MuchLoveJJ

aww this is a really sweet poem. keep up the good work. if you got the time think you could read couple of mine?

Paula <3

Honestly, this is amazing i like really love it...dont ever stop..cuz i think your great...~sherrie~