Break away

by Kara !   Jan 26, 2005


Midnight dreams of taking chances,
Under a moonlit sky.
Ask the questions, find the answers,
To all those promised lies.
Try to break away from boredom
To find another life.
Walk away from the system.
We all wish to be free again.
Just get out from the system.

Plan ahead if you wish to leave now,
Forget all you've been told.
Take your rights and find your way out,
As the explanations unfold.
Make a start for clear perceptions
Run away from all you know.
Walk away from the system.
You want to be free again.
Just get out from the system.

Time to leave but can you make it,
Under that moonlit sky.
You've got to move, this time you can't quit,
But there's nothing left to try.
Try to break away from boredom
To find you never will.
Walk away from the system.
You'll never get to be free again.
You'll never get out from the system.

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  • 18 years ago

    by AGirlWorthFightingFor

    Yeah. damn reagan-omics.

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    This was really good. I'm not sure why, But theres just something about this poem I really liked. It was good that you repeated those few line in each stanza aswell. The flow and rhyme scheme were alright too. Overall, An awesome job! 5/5 Keep it up.

    `taleee xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Woww! this was so well written! it was excellent! it was described well and the flow was good! keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Awesome, it was well written and described and was so beautiful to read. well done

  • Plan ahead if you wish to leave now,
    Forget all you've been told.
    Take your rights and find your way out,
    As the explanations unfold.

    This is my favorite stanza!! You did a wonderful job!! 5/5