Possibly more intensely depressing than any whiny cutter poem on this site. This seems to convey such a strong sense of hopelessness and cynical frustration, and it's well written too.

Wow. There goes the last remnants of my idealistic spirit. Cheers.

-paperdoll

great poem, got the message out clearly , i loved this part...

Plan ahead if you wish to leave now,
Forget all you've been told.
Take your rights and find your way out,
As the explanations unfold.

keep it up! take care

Plan ahead if you wish to leave now,
Forget all you've been told.
Take your rights and find your way out,
As the explanations unfold.

This is my favorite stanza!! You did a wonderful job!! 5/5

Awesome, it was well written and described and was so beautiful to read. well done

Woww! this was so well written! it was excellent! it was described well and the flow was good! keep it up!

This was really good. I'm not sure why, But theres just something about this poem I really liked. It was good that you repeated those few line in each stanza aswell. The flow and rhyme scheme were alright too. Overall, An awesome job! 5/5 Keep it up.

`taleee xx

Yeah. damn reagan-omics.