Love to the Breeze

by EpithetPoet   Jan 26, 2005


L-O-V-E
Just a four letter word
But something to her
Which has never been heard

Gliding along
Following the breeze
Just a soft echo
Whispered through the trees

No one loves her
Because she doesnt exist
Just the marking on a wall
The imprint of a kiss

She's the cold chill
Goosebumps down your spine
Cause no one loved her
No one took the time

So take the time
Just a second or two
Say to your breeze
"I love you"

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  • 19 years ago

    by Krete

    Wow. A really gorgeous piece....an absolute to commit to memory.

    I have a feeling I'll be adding you to my Favorites.

    "Love to the Breeze" -- This poem is just so imensily delightful...a realy pragmatist of a poem to those that give no thought to they're lover -- rather they're 'toy.' --That is if I may speak candidly.

    I really love this one. It is just so beautiful & congenial...A real hat off to you.

    Closer to Fantastic yet, nonetheless, beyond Excellent.

    5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Gemini

    WOW, I love this poem i love love love this poem....it makes you realize well ye i have never sed i love you to the air even though it keeps me alive each day...i love love love this poems keep it up allie, i loved it...gosh...okay sorry...still i loved it keep it up!!!
    -Gems