pretty good 4/5

hey, who doesnt like chocolate. come on. nice one.

that is really good do u think sometime u can halp me on those kind of poems

oh my gosh i think that is so cute!! good job and your doin really well writin happy poems!! keep up the good work!

Vive Le Chocolate!!!!!
:D

haha soooooo know what you mean, CHOCOLATE is soo our gift to recover from our troubles, well mostly.
funny.
polly
xxx

i liked it. it was good. i should give this to my ex! *eats chocolate*

Actually, chocolate does NOT give you bad skin...you may be eating the chocolate because of stress or heartache which can cause breakouts...

Anyway, the poem is very creative. I like it. :)