i absolutely loved this poem and i sincerely meant it. it was really good. it rhymed well in creative ways. i wish i talent like you. im speecheless because i have nothing to correct or advise on. thats good keep rockin the poems
-iyke

omg thats was a really really great poem, u really express feelings through ur poetry, and its really great, hope 2 read more of ur work soon

Wow what a sad poem:( But has a really great meaning! Great work my friend..The last lines are really great and show hope! Amazing poem! Keep this up!
Shannon

this poems is really sad... i'm in tears (mainly because this poem with the song fragile equals tears) but me and my sister were never close... and very happy that you and her get along... i've never had that sisterly love. great poem, keep it up.

man i wish i had a sister who cared that much about me... it jus isnt fair my sister uses my problems to get attention for herself. great poem awesome.

This poem was great. It reminds me of my friends...they are sisters and last year one of them attempted suicide...it is all so upsetting how people could think of killing themselves when there are many people around to care for them... I hope everything works out alright. xxx