this poem was really good. it rhymed well and i dont think that anything was wrong with it. keep rockin the poems because i liked that one
-iyke

great poem! i love it! i can relate really easily! keep it up!

Love, Taylor

thanks guys

sarah.. kinda.. not too sure.. i htink i did at the time but now i know or not.. kinda confusing!

Really liked this one.....you have some talent.....

Kalika