awesome awesome awesome, as i said. i loved it. at one point i had to stop reading to reply to my friend and when i came back and finished i thought i was reading thundersrose coz it was that good. (she a very big inspiration and i a huge fan) that poem really does rok and so do u,
keep ur hed up,
im here 4 ya,
much love and hugs,
ellie
xoxoxoxo

Thanku ellie xx

Awwwww hun I'm sorry you feel like this, if it is you do. I don't know whether this is you recollecting things or It's how you feel now. You know what I'm like!
I ADORE this verse
Crimson words and scattered stones
Traces of compromise…
So many false smiles are faked in turn
Shadowing desperate tries…
..Going to put it on as a quote.
Hold on for me, if nothing/nobody else, even though you have so much going for you.
TAKE CARE OF YOURSELF BREASTICLE :)
All my love,
Laura.

Thanku laura, ur msgs always make me smile :-) xx

there are not words to tell you in what capcity this poem has touched me. i am probably older than you, and i am a writer also. this poem flowed fluently, in the same style that i write too. there is a part of us (survivors), that really never get over what was done to us, we just keep, keeping on. this was beautifully written with expression and floetry. i give hands down to you for one of the best real life poems i have read in awhile. feel free to read some of mine, and dont be alrmed if you do choose to read, that some of them, have the same title, i do that so everyone in each genre can read my stuff. if you are liking my stuff, keep going till you get to the end, because each one says something different in a different way. even if you dont read anything of mine, i just want to say how powerful your words in your poems are......5* rating to be sure.

Thanku all xxx

WOWOWOW AMAZING!!!!!!!!
Hang in there hun,
Kep writing
your loving BF
Oli
xxxxxxx

Love u! xxxx

Thanku! xxx

Thanku1 x