beautiful!! i loove it. im sorry this happened to u. anyways, good write.
Fighter
-xXx-

I loved this poem absolutly amazing.. and I can relate my best friend killed himself as well when he was 21.. anyway excellent write 5

hey well done excellent and im so sorry for your loss if you need to talk im here for you.
take care nessa xoxox
keep it up 5/5

very well written... so sorry bout ur friend... keep up the good work =) love this one... hope u pass by mine =) much love ... +++letishia+++

That's a very sad and poignant poem. Well written though, you have real talent. Sorry to hear about your friend. If u have time, vote or comment on some of mine, thx!