Valentine

by AnnMarie   Jan 26, 2005


Every night I lie in bed and pray,
asking God to never let our love fade away.
I ask him each and every night if he might,
prevent us from any hate and fight,
you are my one and only desired love,
you came to me from heavan above,
you are the only one I dare desire,
you fill my heart with a burning fire,
when your around I still get weak,
and everyday you take my love to a brand new peak,
you fill my heart with love and hope,
and wash out the pain like water and soap,
So I ask you one last question, valentine
could you this day, be all mine?

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  • 17 years ago

    by LithiumSacrifice

    Awe. 5/5. that is soo cute. i love your use of words. they two 1st lines for me hooked. well done i loved it. these two lines would have to be my fav though..
    "you are the only one I dare desire,
    you fill my heart with a burning fire,"

    your style is great. excellent job.

  • 18 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Ohhh..sounds like what I do everynight. So afraid I'll lose the one I love. Anyway. Love it.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Awwww.. that was soo sweet! i loved it.. it flowed well, the rhymes worked and the descriptions were beautiful! wonderful work! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Outstanding flow and sweet sentiment

    the only thing a would do is lose some words in the tenth line

    you won't have to sacrifice the meaning

  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Awww very cute and very sweet... I'm not sure what else to say.. It had great flow and the poem seemed like it wrote itself.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

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