by Shelby G. Jan 26, 2005
category :
Life, society /
about society
Royalty and Commoners |
by Robyn Park
I think this poem is really good, except the ending seems a little sudden. It seems like there are a couple of lines that lead up to the ending, that are missing. Really interesting poem, just think the ending lacks something. Keep it up. |
by Johnny Mac
Hey that is really true, it's gettin messier by the minute. I wrote a new one if you wanna check it out. Good work female blackbird, keep in touch |
by rachel
Original! I loved it. |