Comments : Where I end you begin

  • 19 years ago

    by Marques Sawyer

    very nice writin u have talent keep writin 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    great write!! i loved it!!

    God Bless
    Love Heather

  • 19 years ago

    by Minkus

    Hmmm... I like it, but it seems to need a bit more consistency in the line length when reading it out loud. 4!