Lost..

by dawn   Jan 27, 2005


I'm looking for someone..
Shes lost right now...
She looks a lot like me...
Freckles,Blonde Hair,Blue Eyes..
Our appearances are the same..
We use to be the same inside...
But,I scared her off...
I scared her off by trying to be fake
She saw right through me..
Then she ran away...
I'm offering a reward..
But,I do believe shes impossible to find..
I've been looking and looking..
But,no luck..
I've been trying to find her for months now...
I miss her a lot...
The people around me do to..
I see her in pictures..
I cant believe shes been gone so long..
Her personality is genuine..
She laughs and Shes smart..
She smiles and sees good in everyone..
Where is she now?
I keep looking but have no luck?
I cant seem to get her out..

**This poem is about true self,No ones missing**

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  • 19 years ago

    by Felicia Tursi

    Look harder and then you'll find her.

  • 19 years ago

    by Shædow Poet

    Hey!
    Ok, well I thought it was a good, self relfecting poems, but you need to work on some punctuation...
    after every comma you should have a space so no two words are together. Also between some of your words like 'shes' is should be 'she's', because it's an abbreviation of 'she is'. And I don't think you needed dots at the end of every line.
    Ok, finished with the nit-picking; now onto the actual poem. Once again it was good with a few minor errors; but still a well written poem. Well done!

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