Hey!
Ok, well I thought it was a good, self relfecting poems, but you need to work on some punctuation...
after every comma you should have a space so no two words are together. Also between some of your words like 'shes' is should be 'she's', because it's an abbreviation of 'she is'. And I don't think you needed dots at the end of every line.
Ok, finished with the nit-picking; now onto the actual poem. Once again it was good with a few minor errors; but still a well written poem. Well done!

Look harder and then you'll find her.