What are you talking about? That was amazing! I love your wordage (is that a word?). Everything flows together. It's just great!

~Ciao Lipton

I have to agree with the others, this peom was excellent, it flowed wonderfully. Take care...

I also would have to agree with the others...that poem was absolutely beautiful! You have amazing poetry. take care... LoVeS & PeAcEz
crystal

What are you talking about? Not so good? It's excellent. I enjoyed reading it... Take care.
-nick

How can u not think it's good!? THat was amazing... keep writing you have a gift even if u don't think u do...
Kisses,
M

How can you say "oh my, not so good"?
this was excellent. Darkly beautiful.
I absolutly loved the title alltogether. the line itself is beautiful and it ties in the story so well and with an added effect of beauty.
I absolutly LOVE the lines,
"A tedious disaster
With a hint of glistened tears
Fading into an eclipse
That won't come back for years"
that stance was just absolutly lovely. Incredibly imagery and use of comparison. the whole piece was lovely, and I absolutly loved your main idea and the way you portrayed the neglect and ignorance of her loved ones.
Excellent job, darkly lovely

this is an EXCELLENT poem!! i liked it alot.