Comments : Mothers hands of metal

  • 19 years ago

    by unknown

    thank you for the encouragement to write more

  • 19 years ago

    by clevername

    crazy awsum.... parts confusing... msot brilliant i love how u called the razor blade rhe motherr that was awsum!

  • 19 years ago

    by tragic

    amazing so discriptive I had a movie playing in my head as i read this your awesome you have a unique way of writing too none of that rhyming everyone thinks is poetry, well you keep up that good writing.

  • 19 years ago

    by unknown

    thank you, its most likely to find a sad poem by a famous writer will be an irregular structure and had little rhyme as most of the time a rhyme reminds you of a song and happy thoughts, so most sadder poems have very little rhyme to them, and if it does have a rhyme its normally in mid sentence and not at the end of the line :P well that’s what I’ve noticed from the poetry I have read..

  • 19 years ago

    by unknown

    thank you :)