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by jenni Jan 27, 2005 category : Sadness, depression / lost relationships
You were like a puff of smoke Here and gone in the shut of an eye What did I do to send you away? Why did you have to make me cry. You were like a delicate bubble One minute here, the next extinct Why did you disappear so soon All I did was blinked. You were like a snowflake So fragile in the air But as soon as you touched solidity You disappeared to someplace somewhere. You were like an angel Who I loved with all my heart But obviously it was not mutual You believed we were better apart.So while I commited my soul to you Asleep in my dreaming state You left me and never returned I dreamed of you, my Soul Mate.* The reason I wrote this poem is because me mate wanted to see if I could make 1 up wit dat title... lol. * * Not bad hey? lol *
by Jubes
Not to shabby at all! I like it it cleans up very well! Well done for that if you ask me you succeded very well! nice poem, I was going to say thats great its so original but nice and then i read the bottom! well done :D