The oath

by Cristi   Jan 27, 2005


If you could only see what you do to me
you would understand that you got the key.
to be able to breath the same air you once breathed
would be a blessing
to show how much i love you i wrote this oath
i would change my ways for you
to show my words are true
i cant wait for that day to come
when your on one knee
I DO
I would say loudly
and stand proudly
If you could only look
into the eyes you shook
to look into the eyes of the man
who tingles my ears
if you could only see the love
you have brought to me
if you could only see
the joy you brought to me

If only you knew
that what i say id so true
that I'm ready for commitment with only you
if you could understand
that i want you to be my man
then may god witness this oath
to signify my words of truth

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  • 19 years ago

    by Dorotea©

    wow. good poem! i liked the structure of the poem, and it sounded good when u read it too! good job keep on writing,
    ~SatuzKa~

  • 19 years ago

    by Cristi

    leave a comment please and thankyou